O it’s so dumb to mix
science with
politics!
Our Parties
think man’s curse is
various
universes,
the way it
all expands,
ordained, out
of our hands.
Laborites
think our fate
lies in the
Steady State,
whereas the
other gang
believes in
the Big Bang.
Gutsy the lad
who lives
with those
Conservatives:
their cosmos
mere erosion
after God’s
mad explosion.
The unstressed last syllable in “curse is” / “universes”
and “erosion” / “explosion” provide a welcome break to the singsong regularity
of trimeter, and we know immediately that we are in experienced hands.
Politics is a major theme of the book. Moore is, to put it mildly, disenchanted
with the current political scene. Here is the third section of “Three Little
Money Songs”, with the heading “For the Inauguration of President Bush, the
Second”:
Purchasing power, grab her,
grasp,
and celebrate
money’s last gasp.
Soon power
naked – she’s a teaser –
will woo us.
All Rome loved you, Caesar.
What else need be said?
When Moore’s topic ranges beyond politics, the poems seem to breathe a bit more,
although he maintains his impressive formal technique throughout. One of the
risks of rhymed verse is coming to rely too much on end-rhyme to create the
music of the poem. Moore’s diction – ranging from the lowbrow (“soon we’re
talking dirty”) to references to Sophocles and the great Ukrainian writer Gogol
– occasionally does fall into flatness within a given line. When he strives for
alliterative intensity, however, he achieves it – and how. His internal rhymes
and assonance are reminiscent of the lamentably neglected poet Louis MacNeice,
who could rewrite an insurance brochure and make it sparkle with linguistic
ingenuity. Here is Moore’s gorgeous “Breakfast in Sussex”:
The sunlight splashes, fills
with glitter
our tilled hills,
tractor-chopped, clipper-clipped,
and busy
farmer-whipped,
their last
ounce of production
sucked out by
all that suction.
Our green mammary mounds
where sheep
with soothing sounds
through hedge
openings pass
like grains
through an hourglass –
thus human
life engages
the great
machine, the ages;
and pulled to pieces...hush!
Breakfast is
over. Brush,
as far as you
are able,
metaphors off
the table,
see what the
world becomes.
A firmament
of crumbs.
There is philosophical intensity in this as well. Without the glue of metaphor, into which all language inevitably degrades, the world crumbles. Language is a necessary screen over experience, a filter through which our thoughts travel into the world. But these thoughts themselves are metaphors, methods of interpretation. Without our constant self-talking, what world is left? What silence?
Moore’s poetry encourages such philosophizing. It encourages strong reaction, moments of aesthetic pleasure, moments of laughter. Moore accomplishes what all poets hope to accomplish with their work: he encourages us to be more human.
by Eleanor Goodman
The HyperTexts